i might just, start liking the cold
a little bit more
when i snuggle
into the deliciously warm part of the bed
where you lay untill a few minutes ago
a tad more
when i catch a snowflake with the tip of my tongue
and it makes my mouth tingle
melting down my throat and warming my heart
just like your kiss a few hours ago
just a little bit more
when the cold, biting wind
hugs every inch of my body
numbing, and reminiscent
of the ecstasy that coursed through my body
as you loved me, only a night ago
current song One Night by Jay Sean
posted by dewdrop @ 10:49 AM
9 Comments:
I luv the cold as it is .... wish it would now here :-)
As long as you have me by your side. :P
10PM standup. :))
And we had to wait for soooooo long for this? pah.:P hehehe
that was deliciously pretty :-)
Bhav
I like the stages this poem goes through and how it builds up to the end. Particularly the last line,
"of the ecstasy that coursed through my body
as you loved me, only a night ago"
It contrasts so well with the beginning.
dear Anon, :-) as long as somebody's shoveling you rcar out of the snow forya!
my dear standup, but hows that gonna work if u keep standing me up?
aiyo arvind, what to do? cant seem to write dude!
hey Bhav! how be you? and where has ur blog disappeared :-O hope ur back soon..oh and thanks :-)
hey : A :! thankie thankie! u always have good words for me :-)
Good work deserves good words!
;-)
Hey...Have dropped by here for the first time and I absolutely loved this poem that you've written.The supple eloquence, neat structure and a beautiful end...brilliant!
:A: aww...you're so sweet
Anon, thank you so for those wonderful words of appreciation and moreso for dropping by. Hope you keep coming back. BTW if you write somewhere too, do leave behind a link so I can visit you :-)
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